Lets Make a Storyline.

me and katie think of manga story lines daily.
so forum should too.

post one sentence, no run ons.

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the main character, Neshima, lives in a post apocalyptic world.

Neshima's pet rock dies of cancer.

"Damn, i guess it's time to give up," Neshima said as he rose from burying his rock. "I should probably stop using this side of my imagination as well," he turned away from the small, pointless burial. "Well it's time to go see if anyone else survived," he pushed open the door of the house he was in. Out of all the walls of, only the small amount around the door was still standing. He closed the door behind him and it fell over, crushing his rock's burial.

Sorry King, but how else would it be kicked off o3o

CAM IS WARNED FOR NOT FOLLOWING THE RULES.

"No, it isn't, and never will be." a disembodied voice said from inside the rubble and desolation around him.

he turned around in shock suddenly, "who... who's there?" his mind was flush, was this a dream?

"Don't be afraid? You could've been the cause of all this," Neshima glared at the man.

"How do you know if it isn't your fault Neshima, but know this I am not your enemy." the man slowly faded back into the rubble.

Neshima stared blankly for a few seconds and then, "Wait... how did he know my name?"

Neshima blinked twice, "Am i dreaming?" he asked.

The boy sat and stared at him, his eyes framed with an unearthly delicateness, much unlike the man in the rubble.

"Hey!" a girls voice cried out, "you shouldn't be messing with stuff that isn't yours," she was standing on top of a rock behind winged boy.

At the sound of her voice, the boy rose and went to retreat behind her.

Off-Topic: fuck you guys, i liked where this was going.

On-Topic:
She was tall; with long brown hair kept from her face in a navy headband. Under her machine gun magazine sash she was wearing...Pajamas ? Wait, why was he surpised by the pajamas and not the giant gun slung over her ? He thought this as he walked over to her and the winged boy, foolishly he said to himself, but could not be stopped.

Off-Topic:

King wrote:

Off-Topic: fuck you guys, i liked where this was going.
What did we do :(
On-Topic:
She was tall; with long brown hair kept from her face in a navy headband. Under her machine gun magazine sash she was wearing...Pajamas ? Wait, why was he surpised by the pajamas and not the giant gun slung over her ? He thought this as he walked over to her and the winged boy, foolishly he said to himself, but could not be stopped.

On-Topic:
Immediately, Neshima's head was struck with a rock flung from his right; the force great enough to knock him to the floor, but to weak to kill him.

Off-Topic:You guys werent writing anything ! >:T

On-Topic: 'Oh goddamnit' she said, and towards the place where is came from, the culprit screeching incomprehensible words that sounded alot like swears.

The culprit charged towards Neshima as he attempted to recover and drop kicked him, "Don't you dare try and steal my prize!" the culprit yelled while viciously shaking Neshima's body.

'I told you last time, to FUCK OFF !!' She screamed and shot at the man, who looked like he hadn't eaten in days. The winged boy was cowering behind her, rolled up in a ball.

The man stood up, enduring the stinging pain from the bullet, "A plastic pellet?" he questioned, "Oh i see how it is, i'm not even good enough for you to kill off," he complained.
"I can use a real one just as fast," she answered glaring at his attempt to provoke her.

Off-topic: am following the last one post so don't sue me

"Hello? I'm talking to you," Neshima attempted to get her attention and for her to respond.
"oh, you're still here?" she answered, as she had honestly forgotten about his existence during the short time that passed.

'Can you PLEASE tell me whats happening ? I'm not even sure if this is all real anymore.' he pleaded.