The imagery of this is very well you used nice adjectives could been more specific though making the audience very aware of her surroundings. This would be good in a book for like a second chapter for some reason i have no true idea why a bird would have a key all the attention is focused on THAT key and why does the bird have it. You should continue on this.
_________________"Seems you still haven't realized the greatness of the one you chose as your opponent.
But come at me with your best shot if you realize your failure."