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daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: dax's re-edited bio Sat May 14, 2011 8:27 pm | |
| age:13 race: beast Class: bounty hunter height: 5.8 1/4 (this is my actual height =P) weight: 120 personality: smart half the time, and a strategic, thinks of others before himself weapon(s): a sword that allows him to transmit his powers through, and a dna glove which uses the dna of another person to let the user of the glove use that person powers. alliance: the kels =3 type(s): cloud/lightning
[size=24]strengths: close combat, Defense, barriers weakness: coke, even though range is an option its very weak Skills
Thunder barrier effect:a coating around the user that blows the opponent with a paralyzing shock downside:only last a minute(depends on mp) good things: it deals damage to the attacker and it is also a weapon Ocular ability: Effect: lets him see opponents move through out the process of the opponent using it, able to copy abilities downside:need to be in site of the opponent good thing: O_O Summon: Effect: summons a creature/clone of a person downside:works 50% of the time good thing: helps a lot in combat bio: History of the flames and kels- Spoiler:
Long ago, about five hundred generations back, the first twins of the Flame family were born. One of the two a girl, and the other a boy. The male twin was physically strong and fast, born with control over fire and lightning, and also very skilled with blade type weapons. Not only did he have these abilities, but he was also fifty percent primate, like most Flame members, allowing him to transform back and forth between his primate form and human form, he could even transform halfway instead of full. His sister lacked his strength, but was just as fast, even with his lightning abilities active. Like her brother, she was also born with control over an element, water. What she couldn't do with her strength, she made up for with magic. Unlike her brother, she excelled with magic, which in turn helped make up for her lack of physical strength.(Buffs) Like the majority of the other Flame members, she was also fifty percent animal, only instead of a primate, she was fifty percent feline, the first feline in the entire family. When it came time to marry, her twin brother had no problem, since oddly enough, the fact that he was part primate did not affect any woman's affection toward him, but his sister had -the word tr*ouble has been censored by the king <3-. The reason being her powerfull skills in magic, making men afraid of her, as one wrong move could result in their death. Finally, one man asked to marry her, oblivious to any pain she could cause in the future. The man's last name was Kel. He was a great swordsman, and in return for the first feline's hand, he vowed to assist in the protection of the Flame family for all eternity. After that, the man lived up to his promise, and his son and daughter were the first blood related relatives to assist in the protection of the flames. This was proven easy with Mr. Kel's nique ability. He could create an almost clear barrier out of nothing and it was also indestructable. He would only use this technique 3 times a day. The traits of the two twins were past down within their families, all Kel's learning magic, training their skills with the water element, sword training, and every so often a kel born with the ultimate barrier technique would be taught how to use it and warned on its limits, and the Flame's with their respective skills. As for the animals, the Kel's remained felines, never giving birth to a child that was part primate, or partially both. Every so often, out of pure luck, a Kel child would look like a twin to a Flame child, and vice versa. With even more luck, a Kel girl and Flame boy would resemble the first twins in the Flame family. Even to this generation, the protection plan established by the father of the Kel's is still in affect. Credits to camreonkel for the story line above(other stuff is off element power and scrolled stuff on body)
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| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sat May 14, 2011 8:40 pm | |
| - Spoiler:
- daxflame100 wrote:
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Name:Dax (Demon name darax)
age:13 (demon age 2000)
race:33.3/9 % human 33.3/9 % demon 33.3/9 % monkey <----- do that even make sense XD im 33.3/9 everything if it's gonna contain fractions, why don't you just put 1/3 for all three? personality: evil, smart half the time, and a strategic It's not really all that descriptive, its as if we know nothing about you anymore alliance: jna and maplemation(im in maplemation alot) do you really want them to kill you element(s):lightning/thunder(static etc anything thats lightning thunder related) fire, and darkness Ok, the lightning and fire part are senseable, but like Tammy said below, thunder is just the sound. Also, shadow fag. strengths: close combat, range, swords, kunai, guns, death, water, wind, anything metal First off, you originally stated that your range was horrible, and second, since when do any of your elements have an advantage over wind/air? weakness: banana, light/holy, water, wind( why these to in both you ask look at my elements XD) coke The water weakness is understandable, since one you can't swim, and two it can douse fire, but what is the wind gonna do? Air actually helps fire Dax. bio: 1 bro(ape)flame) and 1 sis(cat)kel) twins both got married to 2 people thus cam is a kel and i am a flame we are like twins with all the instinct and what not but cam is exact opposite of me he is a master of range i am a master of melee after the years the years a war broke out and dax's mom got raped by a demon thus the 33.3/9 demon my mother abandon me and i was part of the kel family from then Dax has been looking for his mother since. On dax's 13th birthday he swore to find that demon and kill him now Dax is a bounty hunter he has ranked his way up now he is in the rank of which all the demon bounty hunters are... in the top 10 still after so many years he still has not learned the full extent of his demon powers the only power he knows is the black flames and his ocular moves. (short story) Honestly Dax, what Uncle, Aunt, Parent, Teacher, Friend, ect. is gonna let a thirteen year old spend his time searching for a demon instead of his school work?
Meow o3o and you have the story so unorganized dammit dax when i get my computer back you and i are gonna fix this
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| | | MoonsAura F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sat May 14, 2011 9:38 pm | |
| cam and i wrote the story over gmail i wrote the raped and stuff part =P btw blame cat for taking part of the female side and being less adventures then i which is a yin and yang in that fact =3
cats:feminine, lazy, not adventures
monkeys: more male, wildish, fun, more adventures then cats =3 does this make sense | |
| | | MoonsAura F1R5T!!11!
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| | | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sun May 15, 2011 9:24 am | |
| - MoonsAura wrote:
- Yo cats are curious more than monkeys cats would do something a monkey would be afraid to do -.- I have a cat she's hella not lazy she acts like a freakin dog ask Joe HE ALSO has a cat AND Dog and note i also volenteer at the zoo for 4 summers work with primates and big cats the big cats were much more active than the monkey.....Also the fact the females are more wilder than the males since they could fight better than the males since there more of a protecters i seen this also with lemurs, apes, and gorillias .And it doesn't explain the horrible grammar also there barly any ying yang remove and fix this damned story or this will be removed and fix by me.
This is why Tammy's awesome And she has a huge point Dax | |
| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Thu May 19, 2011 8:20 pm | |
| how does i do the spoiler thing O_O | |
| | | MoonsAura F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 20, 2011 1:06 pm | |
| 1 a ulitime barrier that's overpowered who would be able to break it. 2 I'm pretty sure thats from xmen gambite and a guy from maplemations Illusion also pretty sure I heard it from a book cough twilight cough nice going And there's now 2 last resort so technically you cant die I see to many references from anime and other people good going | |
| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 20, 2011 2:49 pm | |
| i watch too much anime illusion im pretty shore im not the only one who uses and the ultimate barrier is a name of it doesnt mean its ultimate you have to be a strategic to figure out the weak points =P and the ultimate defense isnt like that seriously xmen i dont do that anime yes i do XD illusions was a based on character thing i was originally gonna make it explosives and illusion but i was more of a speed guy myself so i added lightning | |
| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 20, 2011 2:50 pm | |
| btw (sorry for doubling...again) the ultimate defence has a time of 5 minutes or less depending on how strong you are | |
| | | MoonsAura F1R5T!!11!
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| | | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 20, 2011 4:07 pm | |
| fine ill edit all my moves btw i thought of blaze burner before cams giga lazer cam you have to say the right thing here | |
| | | King Admin
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sat May 21, 2011 1:02 pm | |
| oh wow you gais are takin care of err' thing arent ya ? | |
| | | daxflame100
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sat May 21, 2011 6:08 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sun May 22, 2011 3:57 pm | |
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| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Sun May 22, 2011 9:43 pm | |
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| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
Gender : Posts : 262 Join date : 2011-02-19 Age : 29 Location : The Revolution's Library
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Tue May 24, 2011 7:27 am | |
| Ok time to do this again - daxflame100 wrote:
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Name:Dax
age:13
race:33.3/9 % human 33.3/9 % demon 33.3/9 % monkey <----- does that even make sense yet again that would get you a little over 100% Class: bounty hunter
height: 5.8 1/4 (this is my actual height =P) Damn you're as tall as me o.o weight: 120
personality: smart half the time, and a strategic, thinks of others before himself Explain a little more weapon(s): kunai, anything long range, swords
alliance: jna and maplemation(i'm in maplemation a lot)
element(s):lightning, fire, and darkness
strengths: close combat, range, swords, kunais, guns, anything metal
weakness: banana, light/holy, water, wind, coke
Abilities
Blaze burner ( similar to camreons giga lazer in some ways ) in indepth description of your skills *tisk* *tisk* Summon kunai (not really an ability other then i created the scroll) ( arm scroll summons kunai )
Drain (transfers moves... how did i get it you ask well i went to cham world one day helped cham beat the guy that stole most of his moves and used his move (drain) to get that move =P complicated) drain wares of in 24 hours (how do i keep the move if it was drained you ask well like cam i make clones too except real clones of myself so i keep draining clones everyday before 24 hours come =P)
Clones:replicates me so any one with ocular powers cant tell the dif
Substitution:subs me in with a dummy
Back from the grave: if im about to die this move will make an exact copy of me and the one that died will disappear ( easy right...wronggggggg if i make a mistake i will die unless im scrolled or have a priest with me to make a perfect heal )
Susano: my skeleton friend who is connected to me by my spinal cord he is the greatest barrier know and is able to fuse with the host.(thats the demon me)
Electric barrier: if someone comes in contact of me they get shocked if the 10 min(1 min in maple time ) barrier is on.
Electric blade: it's basically my blade extended with my lightning powers/my darkness powers.
Electro prison: a prison made of electricity O_O
illusion: pauses the person where s/he is and makes them be in their worst nightmare
card explosives: cards that are like mines in this case
the rabbid tammy summon: chances are im gonna die if i let this one loose O_O ( naw jk tammy ) =3
nuke explosion: explodes my electrical barrier around me in a nuke like form argo it destroys everything
cam egg: summons a sub cam doll in my place =3 Cam egg... you don't even know the point of the egg idea and you're still using it oh well copy: my eyes are stolen from naruto so yea if you watch naruto you know what it is ( basically lets me imitate the move
last resort: i seal the person in my body and in any case of another battle each time i look like im bout to die that person i absorbed dies ( only reason its my last resort is because 75% death unless in a demons position then they are already dead so yea)
cloths beam: pimps out someones cloths ( idk why i made this... oh yea to explain what i did with cams old cloths in my series XD )
bio: History of the flames and kels
Long ago, about five hundred generations back, the first twins of the Flame family were born. One of the two a girl, and the other a boy. The male twin was physically strong and fast, born with control over fire and lightning, and also very skilled with blade type weapons. Not only did he have these abilities, but he was also fifty percent primate, like most Flame members, allowing him to transform back and forth between his primate form and human form, he could even transform halfway instead of full. His sister lacked his strength, but was just as fast, even with his lightning abilities active. Like her brother, she was also born with control over an element, water. What she couldn't do with her strength, she made up for with magic. Unlike her brother, she excelled with magic, which in turn helped make up for her lack of physical strength.(Buffs) Like the majority of the other Flame members, she was also fifty percent animal, only instead of a primate, she was fifty percent feline, the first feline in the entire family. When it came time to marry, her twin brother had no problem, since oddly enough, the fact that he was part primate did not affect any woman's affection toward him, but his sister had -the word tr*ouble has been censored by the king <3-. The reason being her powerfull skills in magic, making men afraid of her, as one wrong move could result in their death. Finally, one man asked to marry her, oblivious to any pain she could cause in the future. The man's last name was Kel. He was a great swordsman, and in return for the first feline's hand, he vowed to assist in the protection of the Flame family for all eternity. After that, the man lived up to his promise, and his son and daughter were the first blood related relatives to assist in the protection of the flames. This was proven easy with Mr. Kel's nique ability. He could create an almost clear barrier out of nothing and it was also indestructable. He would only use this technique 3 times a day. The traits of the two twins were past down within their families, all Kel's learning magic, training their skills with the water element, sword training, and every so often a kel born with the ultimate barrier technique would be taught how to use it and warned on its limits, and the Flame's with their respective skills. As for the animals, the Kel's remained felines, never giving birth to a child that was part primate, or partially both. Every so often, out of pure luck, a Kel child would look like a twin to a Flame child, and vice versa. With even more luck, a Kel girl and Flame boy would resemble the first twins in the Flame family. Even to this generation, the protection plan established by the father of the Kel's is still in affect.
Credits to camreonkel for the story line above
birth of the bounty hunter: the bounty hunter was founded in the rare case of to many outlaws it was founded by my great great great great great (i think O_O) great grandpa at that time the idea was still going about a new class and when the job instructors herd about it they thought why not (at this time the crime rate was low and it wasnt going to be called the bounty hunters till 5 years later) so they picked the most skilled people of the 5 classes darax flame the greatest warrior, artheus kel the greatest long ranged priest,(ill finish this tomorrow)
fun facts and spoilerness ( lol im such a spoiler if you go and watch my series ill tell you the ahead note that im a full pledged bounty hunter at that point XD ) the bounty hunter is a class of skilled assassins, warriors, and pirates(i didnt say archers cause it takes to long to reload =P) , in some cases priests because of their healing ability
all bounty hunters learn to summon clones of a priest, their calling animal(in my case a monkey), and weapons. Dax this part is the actual bio, not the stats, but the story(ies) behind your character. Meaning that it should look like a final draft, or at the very least look like proper sentences. Also the bounty hunter class has been around longer than six/sevn generations back, and this also sounds like a completely altered form, so at least change or add to the name of the class.
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| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Tue May 24, 2011 2:48 pm | |
| fuck of cam my class my rules your class your rule -___- and why not gmail anymore D= | |
| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Tue May 24, 2011 3:40 pm | |
| - daxflame100 wrote:
- fuck of cam my class my rules your class your rule -___-
technically it was just a suggestion and no need to result to cussing why not gmail anymore D= My mom took my phone and my computer's not fixed :P
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| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Tue May 24, 2011 3:45 pm | |
| the how are you online now O_O | |
| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 27, 2011 3:59 pm | |
| - daxflame100 wrote:
- the how are you online now O_O
[color=cyan]Cause i'm using my grandfather's computer, and two questions 1.Are you done with the bio? 2.Where's the story on you? | |
| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Fri May 27, 2011 4:00 pm | |
| that doesnt explain why you cant go on gmail =P no im not done cause im working on mbr and im thinking up one | |
| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Wed Jun 01, 2011 6:31 am | |
| I remembered where i first saw exploding cards o3o Gambit from X-men XD
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| | | daxflame100
Gender : Posts : 214 Join date : 2011-04-22 Age : 26 Location : training in the revolution army
| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Wed Jun 01, 2011 1:32 pm | |
| dont tell anyone that XD based off that character but better ass stuff | |
| | | Camreonkel F1R5T!!11!
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| Subject: Re: dax's re-edited bio Wed Jun 01, 2011 4:08 pm | |
| - daxflame100 wrote:
- dont tell anyone that XD based off that character but better ass stuff
... i don't think i have too | |
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