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PostSubject: Lets Make a Storyline.   Sat Mar 12, 2011 11:55 pm

me and katie think of manga story lines daily.
so forum should too.

post one sentence, no run ons.

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the main character, Neshima, lives in a post apocalyptic world.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Mon Jun 13, 2011 3:24 pm

Neshima's pet rock dies of cancer.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Mon Jun 13, 2011 8:35 pm

"Damn, i guess it's time to give up," Neshima said as he rose from burying his rock. "I should probably stop using this side of my imagination as well," he turned away from the small, pointless burial. "Well it's time to go see if anyone else survived," he pushed open the door of the house he was in. Out of all the walls of, only the small amount around the door was still standing. He closed the door behind him and it fell over, crushing his rock's burial.

Sorry King, but how else would it be kicked off o3o

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Tue Jun 14, 2011 12:31 pm

he turned around and noticed the burial and started to sob, "life isnt fair is it?"
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Tue Jun 14, 2011 7:53 pm

"No, it isn't, and never will be." a disembodied voice said from inside the rubble and desolation around him.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Tue Jun 14, 2011 8:17 pm

he turned around in shock suddenly, "who... who's there?" his mind was flush, was this a dream?
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:08 pm

A man appears suddenly from the shadow," Only me Neshima do not be afraid."

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 1:32 pm

"Don't be afraid? You could've been the cause of all this," Neshima glared at the man.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 3:59 pm

"How do you know if it isn't your fault Neshima, but know this I am not your enemy." the man slowly faded back into the rubble.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 8:46 pm

Neshima stared blankly for a few seconds and then, "Wait... how did he know my name?"
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:08 pm

Suddenly a white light fell from the sky with incredible speed, Nashima rush towards the fallen light when he found the source of the fallen light ,it was a boy with wings.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 15, 2011 9:25 pm

Neshima blinked twice, "Am i dreaming?" he asked.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Thu Jun 16, 2011 11:31 am

The boy groaned and then sat up , he stared at Neshima, his wings folded behind his back and a shiny halo framed his head, he looked completely unearthly , " Um hey you ok?" Neshima said with un called for concerned.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Thu Jun 16, 2011 8:20 pm

The boy sat and stared at him, his eyes framed with an unearthly delicateness, much unlike the man in the rubble.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Sun Jun 19, 2011 1:39 am

"Hey!" a girls voice cried out, "you shouldn't be messing with stuff that isn't yours," she was standing on top of a rock behind winged boy.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Sun Jun 19, 2011 12:16 pm

At the sound of her voice, the boy rose and went to retreat behind her.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 22, 2011 4:21 pm

Off-Topic: fuck you guys, i liked where this was going.

On-Topic:
She was tall; with long brown hair kept from her face in a navy headband. Under her machine gun magazine sash she was wearing...Pajamas ? Wait, why was he surpised by the pajamas and not the giant gun slung over her ? He thought this as he walked over to her and the winged boy, foolishly he said to himself, but could not be stopped.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 22, 2011 5:24 pm

Off-Topic:
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Off-Topic: fuck you guys, i liked where this was going.
What did we do :(
On-Topic:
She was tall; with long brown hair kept from her face in a navy headband. Under her machine gun magazine sash she was wearing...Pajamas ? Wait, why was he surpised by the pajamas and not the giant gun slung over her ? He thought this as he walked over to her and the winged boy, foolishly he said to himself, but could not be stopped.
On-Topic:
Immediately, Neshima's head was struck with a rock flung from his right; the force great enough to knock him to the floor, but to weak to kill him.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 22, 2011 7:04 pm

Off-Topic:You guys werent writing anything ! >:T

On-Topic: 'Oh goddamnit' she said, and towards the place where is came from, the culprit screeching incomprehensible words that sounded alot like swears.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Wed Jun 22, 2011 9:18 pm

The culprit charged towards Neshima as he attempted to recover and drop kicked him, "Don't you dare try and steal my prize!" the culprit yelled while viciously shaking Neshima's body.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Thu Jun 23, 2011 12:28 am

'I told you last time, to FUCK OFF !!' She screamed and shot at the man, who looked like he hadn't eaten in days. The winged boy was cowering behind her, rolled up in a ball.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Sun Jun 26, 2011 1:14 am

The man stood up, enduring the stinging pain from the bullet, "A plastic pellet?" he questioned, "Oh i see how it is, i'm not even good enough for you to kill off," he complained.
"I can use a real one just as fast," she answered glaring at his attempt to provoke her.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Mon Jun 27, 2011 11:46 pm

( Off topic) Cause i wasnt here O3o

(on topic) : "Fine," the man groaned "but I'll be back with more, you won't take my prize." then the man faded into the rubble. " What the hell was that!" Neshima said fearfully,but the girl seemed distant and unaware that he was speaking.

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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Tue Jun 28, 2011 12:04 am

"Hello? I'm talking to you," Neshima attempted to get her attention and for her to respond.
"oh, you're still here?" she answered, as she had honestly forgotten about his existence during the short time that passed.
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PostSubject: Re: Lets Make a Storyline.   Tue Jun 28, 2011 4:00 pm

'Can you PLEASE tell me whats happening ? I'm not even sure if this is all real anymore.' he pleaded.

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