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| Subject: A Bio Tut/ Audtion Tut Sun Mar 20, 2011 2:50 pm | |
| Just feel like i gotta put this i just wanna hear about your character since i see people make audition videos/ biography and there stuff are really ....bad Inspired to make this because of Aya
NO NO LIST - Rage transformations are cliche - No Overpowered people( gives an unfair advantage and its lame) - Do NOT base your bio off TV shows if your going to copy every single detail.( And also its sorta copyrighted or trademarked soooooo offender) *Can base on video games like maple story but not to much ok :D -(I repeat If you ever have a second form don't make a serious form that's angry and too serious and is very godly and possesses unlimited power I mean your not dragon ball here well even in dragon ball they had LIMITS). - Making your biography like book story it seems more interesting and people can find what they want to read unless u actually put ch.1 ch.2 etc... -Dont make them bland make your character full of emotions and changing overtime like yourself -Your Not perfect so don't make your character perfect -_-
Good things :D
- Special abilities - Bio created from your brain, not TV - Weaknesses and Strengths balance out. - Base your character from your dreams and hearts desires dont be to crazy though - EXPAND YOUR VOCABULARY Character Abilities -Sorta like Pokemon :D -Name: (be creative or use your own name) -Age: (could be a old man , could be a 12 year old troll , But if you want to be immortal tell me WHYYYYYYY and dont say I am born a god) -Personality: Put good and bad to even it out -Alignment: Your side Good ,Bad , Neutral, From a clan, what ever you want -Race or humanoid:Humanoids: 1.Humans 2.Gods 3.Angels & Fallen Angels 4. Demons 5.Beasts 6.A.I.s 7.Vampires 8.Werewolves 9.Elementals 10.Zombies 11.Elvens BE ORIGINAL OR AT LEAST SOMETHING MORE THAN A HUMAN ...still humans are alright i guess -Height/Weight: (Why not you could be a fat ninja or a skinny sumo wrestler) -Element: Think Real Elements like from Avatar the last air bender or Turtle bear (maple series)
THIS IS WHAT PEOPLE WANT FROM YOU MAKE IT SKILL BASH AWESOMENESS Abilities: A combo of simple things and awesome things. People like melee characters but make him have some skills no one wants a boring or super powered character Strengths: Not to much here maybe 4-8 things Weaknesses: Again do to 4-8 things or could do The Scale EX: Strengths: (1), (2), (3), (1) Weaknesses: (4), (4) The numbers represent how hard it strengthens you or weakens you. You don't have to use the str/wk n impact scale, it's an example.(note not a lot fo people use it but i think its easier)
BackGround Your background story! This is all about you and your past. Try being creative here. Dont rush your story ,make it flow evenly , cronticlogical order please <3 Add your Future story (note you'll probely change your mind overtime so i dont recommend it)
How to Write Your Bio Here we go, how you use your sentences in your bio. Nobody likes this: Selma wanted to train. Selma set up dummies. Selma striked at the dummy. The dummy flew across the room. UGGGHHHH BORING! It's boring, right? Duh! Let's try this, don't repeat pronouns too much in your sentences. When you do that, it'll look like this! Selma wanted to train by herself, so she set up some dummies and striked at them making them fly across the room! Now that's a good sentence!
Now with your paragraph, you want to make it look neat and organized. Be sure to press 'Enter' after you wrote 5-8 sentences or when you change the topic. For example:
Selma wasn't the daughter anybody could deny. She was a stickler to the rules, respected her elders, and cared for the littler ones. She was very well adored in her hometown of Malmö, due to her good deeds at the local hospitals and orphanages. It was never tiring for her, until she had a conversation with best friend, Tatiana, telling her that it must be tiring for her. Tatiana was right, So Selma told her parents about changing herself. It was hard to decide since she had a lot of things in mind. She started out by ditching the hospital care center and orphanage. Walking in the streets, the clueless Selma turned around hearing the sound of yells, punches, and breaking wood. It was a Karate class. She ran to the dojo to take some lessons; but then, somebody told her to stop.
Green means that was indented correctly. The topic changed and the first paragraph contained 5 sentences. See how it changed from Selma being a nice girl, to her wanting to learn Karate in a smoother way? Indeed =D
Try reading this: Selma wasn't the daughter anybody could deny. She was a stickler to the rules, respected her elders, and cared for the littler ones. She was very well adored in her hometown of Malmö, due to her good deeds at the local hospitals and orphanages. It was never tiring for her, until she had a conversation with best friend, Tatiana, telling her that it must be tiring for her. Tatiana was right, So Selma told her parents about changing herself. It was hard to decide since she had a lot of things in mind. She started out by ditching the hospital care center and orphanage. Walking in the streets, the clueless Selma turned around hearing the sound of yells, punches, and breaking wood. It was a Karate class. She ran to the dojo to take some lessons; but then, somebody told her to stop.
Looks really unorganized, right? That's why you NEED to indent! You can't tell when the first topic stops. Credits to Aya For ^^^^^^^^ Part
NEVER EVER EVER DO THIS
- Spoiler:
Name: Lana Age: Immortal Alliance: Good Race: God Gender: Female Height: 5"6 Origin: Birth of Everything Spoken languages: Every laungue Known and unknown Element: all elements and alchemy
Bio: Was Born an God and is still a god she goes to earth and Rids the place of Evil now she's the best thing on earth and then the evil sprits came back so she wipe them out with her Divineness
Personality: Kind, Truthful , Loyal, Pure, Good, Awesome, Divine
Weapon: She could use anything around her
Abilities: Elemental blast Fire Water Earth Lightning Thunder Wind Darkness Light Ice Super Strength Super Speed God Like Powers
Likes: everything
Dislikes: Nothing
Strengths: Unlimited powers
Weaknesses: No weaknesses Cuz she has the ability to do anything
GOOD BIO (Credits to Aya To both of these)
- Spoiler:
Name: Selma Birk Age: 17 Alliance: Good Race: Martial Artist Gender: Female Height: '5"6 Origin: Swedish Spoken languages: English (not fluent) and Swedish Element: N/A
Bio:
Who she is Selma wasn't the daughter anybody could deny. She was a stickler to the rules, respected her elders, and cared for the littler ones. She was very well adored in her hometown of Malmö, due to her good deeds at the local hospitals and orphanages. It was never tiring for her, until she had a conversation with best friend, Tatiana, telling her that it must be tiring for her. Tatiana was right, So Selma told her parents about changing herself.
Changing It was hard to decide since she had a lot of things in mind. She started out by ditching the hospital care center and orphanage. Walking in the streets, the clueless Selma turned around hearing the sound of yells, punches, and breaking wood. It was a Karate class. She ran to the dojo to take some lessons; but then, somebody told her to stop.
"Where do you think you're going?" the mysterious individual remarked
"To ehh... how you say, take a class in Karate?" Selma replied in a questionable tone. Selma's English was never fluent.
"You don't wanna go there" he said in a persuasive manner, "It's too rough for you"
"What you mean?" She questioned "I can handle it!"
"Ugh, just follow me" the man grabbed Selma's hand and went off with her. After hours of walking, the man finally told her that the location they're at is where she can learn true Karate. The man pushed her to a room filled with swords and training dummies.
"Where's the trainer?" She asked Before she could finish, the man shut the door.
"Wait!" she cried. She was left alone in the room, with nothing to do. Hours passed, no one came to look for her. Digging in her pockets, Selma tried to find her phone; no luck. That man must have taken it away so she can't contact anybody.
Training alone Selma decided to find some dummies, set them up, and tried to practice on her own. With her first strike at the dummy, it flew across the room and broke into pieces. This just pumped her blood and excited her; she never knew how strong she was. Maybe from all of that helping before gave her quite the workout.
Now Training for months, she feels she's experienced enough to chase on her new life. Leaving the room by kicking the door out of the way, she went back home to show her family and her friend some moves she made up; but with all that skill, she became arrogant, maybe a little too arrogant. Selma thought she can take anything on, so she entered as many tournaments as she can and started a lot of fights. The strength is getting all to her head, but she liked the way it felt. Now you can find her anywhere, as long as there's an exceptional fight going on.
Personality: Fun to be around, protective of her loved ones, very arrogant, and extremely hyper.
Weapon: Her own two fists!
Abilities: Drop Kick (It's a real move, you can look it up) Steel Elbow (Elbows the person behind her hard) Karate Chop (It's a real move, you can look it up) ...and your usual Karate moves.
Likes: Food, fighting, fingerless gloves (They make her look cool), training, learning new moves, and exercising.
Dislikes: Being nagged around, being interrupted, all kinds of anime, learning better English, and anything that confuses her.
Strengths: Strong feet Strong arms & hands.
Weaknesses: Your average human weaknesses, it's not like she's some kind of god! Anything that confuses her, it makes her think about it and makes her lose her focus.
- Spoiler:
Name: Aya
Age: 14
Alignment: Good
Race: Human Instrument (Music Fighter)
Gender: Female
Height: '5"2
Origin: Japanese, German, Mexican
Spoken languages: English, Japanese and Spanish.
Element: The Man Made Element of Music and Sound.
Bio: Born in a mansion in New Leaf City, raised by her rich mother and stepfather in 1996. During her toddler years, she already new how to serve tea, knit, and to sing opera. One day, her grandma came over to give Aya's mother her special fever remedy recipe. Unfortunately, she forgot her imported herbs. Aya volunteered to help so she went to get them. But when she lost her way to get herbs from Ellinia for her grandmother's fever remedy, she ended up in Kerning city. As the years past, she thought that her parents weren't looking for her. She found a new home and became very likable in Kerning because of all her good deeds done there. One day, she wandered to the poor side of Kerning When suddenly she saw a pair of headphones lying on the ground. She picked them up because they were left on the street. She asked if those earphones belonged to anyone, but nobody knew. So she kept them. She's always wanted a new pair of earphones. Aya ran back home. She put them on. But when she wanted to take them off, it felt weird. When her hands were even close to the top of the headphones, the headphones repelled her hand away from it. She tried a lot of ways to take them off, but no matter what it repelled her hands away from them. Then she saw someone through a mirror. She turned around but nobody was there except a microphone laying on her bed. She wanted to test it out so she sang a note and big sound waves destroyed her room's windows. She panicked. So she decided to keep everything that happened to her that day a secret.
Personality: Has a big heart and is very helpful. She can be very clumsy and a little forgetful.
Aya's Nickname: Zayou or DJ Zayou Why: Aya just think Zayou sounds cute!
Weapon: Black Microphone or Fists (sometimes she doesn't use her microphone so she justs attacks with her fist).
Abilities: *Sonic Boom* (She speaks in her mic. and huge sonic waves aim and attack the enemy) *Fly* (She uses her energy to lift herself up) *Ninja Rush* (Attacking while running to different angles of the enemy) *Distract* (Uses her energy to create a distraction.) *Red Ring Toss* (A disc made from song can be thrown once. She'll have to recharge to throw another)
Hobbies: Drawing and singing
Likes: Everything!
Dislikes: Perverts, and spiders.
Strengths: Throat cannot be strained, unless (look in weaknesses)
Weaknesses: A rare sickness, Lalamunan kumamot (throat scratch), which causes her voice to crack up because it strains her throat. It is caused by the Hitama plant. Her own microphone used against her.
Heres A Template to make your life easier Name: Age: Alignment: Clan/Team/Group: Alliance: Race: Gender: Personality: Sexual Orientation: Character Picture: Likes: Dislikes: Strengths: Weaknesses: Biography (long or short): Abilities: Favorite Dishes: Resides: Zodiac sign: Height: Weight: Birthday: Favorite Color: Languages: Occupation: Preferred music: Acquaintances: Contacts: | |
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| Subject: Re: A Bio Tut/ Audtion Tut Mon May 30, 2011 3:02 pm | |
| oh tammy, you are so awesome~ amazing contributor. | |
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